Long and Short Reviews loved Who Saw the Deep!

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I am thrilled that Long and Short Reviews really enjoyed Who Saw the Deep. They gave the novel 4.5 stars! Here’s part of the review:

This book desperately needs a sequel. While all of the most important questions find answers, I am extremely interested in finding out what happens to Noah and Amelia after Who Saw the Deep ends. The final chapter drops hints about the future that made me wish the narrative would never end.

Who Saw the Deep is a must-read for anyone who loves alien invasion stories or heart-stopping mysteries.If these genres are up your alley, go pick up a copy today!

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Editor's Pick

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Romance, Suspense, Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Mystery
Word Count: 55,000
Published By: Evernight Publishing
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When Noah moves back home after grad school, he doesn’t expect a simple handyman job to turn deadly. Amelia seems like a sweet old lady with a run-down house, but appearances can be deceptive. When an alien ship lands in her woods, Noah discovers that everything he believed about Earth and human civilization is wrong.

Amelia already gave her heart to one man—does she really want to let another one inside? Even though Noah is everything she ever wanted, can she really trust him? He seems like a good person, but her family’s genetic legacy is more important than romance.

When all their secrets are laid bare, Noah and Amelia discover that the survival of their species may be more dependent on love than either could have imagined. Civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals. And love, especially in the face of betrayal, is worth everything.

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Editor's Pick

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Romance, Suspense, Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Mystery
Word Count: 55,000
Published By: Evernight Publishing
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When Noah moves back home after grad school, he doesn’t expect a simple handyman job to turn deadly. Amelia seems like a sweet old lady with a run-down house, but appearances can be deceptive. When an alien ship lands in her woods, Noah discovers that everything he believed about Earth and human civilization is wrong.

Amelia already gave her heart to one man—does she really want to let another one inside? Even though Noah is everything she ever wanted, can she really trust him? He seems like a good person, but her family’s genetic legacy is more important than romance.

When all their secrets are laid bare, Noah and Amelia discover that the survival of their species may be more dependent on love than either could have imagined. Civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals. And love, especially in the face of betrayal, is worth everything.

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Chapter One of Who Saw the Deep!

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Editor's Pick

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Romance, Suspense, Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Mystery
Word Count: 55,000
Published By: Evernight Publishing
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When Noah moves back home after grad school, he doesn’t expect a simple handyman job to turn deadly. Amelia seems like a sweet old lady with a run-down house, but appearances can be deceptive. When an alien ship lands in her woods, Noah discovers that everything he believed about Earth and human civilization is wrong.

Amelia already gave her heart to one man—does she really want to let another one inside? Even though Noah is everything she ever wanted, can she really trust him? He seems like a good person, but her family’s genetic legacy is more important than romance.

When all their secrets are laid bare, Noah and Amelia discover that the survival of their species may be more dependent on love than either could have imagined. Civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals. And love, especially in the face of betrayal, is worth everything.

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Chapter One:

Noah rang the doorbell. Faded red paint peeled down the wood in front of him in long, delicate strips, as if the door had been half-skinned, then abandoned. His fingers ached at the thought of how much work it would take to fix the damage. He picked at a loose section near the doorknob until a fragment slipped off into his palm. Absently, he scratched a thumbnail over the rough backside. A few small flakes drifted onto the spotless porch.

He quickly stuffed the rest of the scrap in his pocket and shivered in the morning air, wishing he were home with a hot cup of coffee, but no. He had to talk himself into doing the handyman thing. He sighed, about to pick at the paint again, when the door abruptly opened. He froze, hand in midair, as an older woman stared out at him, one eyebrow lifted in what was obviously amusement. He cleared his throat, trying to remember what the hell he was doing here. Her blue eyes were strangely penetrating.

“I’m Noah Heath. My dad told me you’re looking for someone to work on your house?”

She nodded, but didn’t speak, just looked at him with her creepily perceptive eyes. Noah shifted his weight uncomfortably, wishing he’d brought his toolbox instead of leaving it in the trunk, but suddenly she stepped back, one hand gesturing him inside.

“I was expecting you fifteen minutes ago,” she said, holding the door for him. He reluctantly followed her into the gloomy house.

He shrugged. “Sorry. I took a wrong turn on the way here from town.”

She nodded. “If you’re not used to the roads, it’s easy to get lost.”

Noah carefully didn’t mention that he’d grown up in the area. He needed this job, if only to get out of his dad’s house. He was going nuts there with nothing to do except listen to the old man talk about his precious legacy.

“I was going to put an ad in the local news flier, but I’m not sure how many people actually read that anymore. I almost put a listing online, but I don’t really like the Internet all that much. It seems so impersonal.” She closed the door behind them. Noah blinked, forcing his eyes to adjust to the gloom after being in the bright morning sunlight.

“You’re Jaime’s boy, right? The one with the fancy PhD he’s been bragging about?”

Noah willed himself not to flush. He was a grown man, yet his dad persisted in embarrassing him—talking up his education all over town like he was a little kid who’d made honor roll. Noah loved his father, really he did, and he wanted to spend some time with him now that he’d finished his degree, but the bragging had to stop. He made a mental note to ask his father to tone it down. Again.

“Yup, that’s me. My dad said you’d been asking for a handyman at the hardware store?”

“Yes, I was. Just chance that your father overheard me talking to the cashier. You know, I went to school with your dad’s older brother, back in the day. That man did good work. Your father said you inherited the handyman genes from him.” She held out a small hand. “I’m Amelia.”

Noah grasped her fingers gently, afraid to squeeze too hard, but she gripped him firmly.

“Yeah. I’ve heard that my uncle Tony was good with his hands.” It was odd that she’d introduced herself with her first name. He wasn’t used to addressing women her age so casually. “Nice to meet you, Amelia.”

She smiled and Noah looked around the dim entrance, trying not to stare as she girlishly tucked her long silver hair behind her ear. It was strange that she wore it so long. He remembered his grandma’s hair: short and poufy. She kept it a horribly vivid red until the day she’d died. Amelia’s hair looked soft and his fingers twitched.

“As you can see from the front door, the house needs a fair amount of work. The bones are solid, but I haven’t been able to keep up with painting and whatnot since my husband died.” She gestured at the walls and Noah squinted at some cracked plaster in the living room that needed work. On the far side of the room, a staircase rose to the second floor. Beyond the steps he could just make out the kitchen. The stairs looked like they needed repair as well. Some of the railings were crooked and the wood of the risers was worn.

Nothing really lasts, Noah thought, depressed. “I think I can help with painting and some basic repairs. Anything involving plumbing, though, forget it. I suck at plumbing,” he joked, trying to shake his sudden moodiness.

Amelia grinned. “The plumbing is sound, thankfully.” She stepped further into the room.

He followed her deeper into the house, telling himself to get a grip. You’re here to work, not mope. The scraps of paint he’d shoved in his pocket itched, but he ignored the pricking as Amelia walked to the dining room. She seemed spry for her age, moving easily. He wondered how old she was. He couldn’t help but compare her thin frame to his dad’s heavier body. Maybe it was easier to get old if you were skinny? His dad fell into chairs, the extra weight on his bones making him drop into the furniture as if gravity pulled on him too hard. He shoved his hand into his pocket, crushing the scraps of paint in his fist.

“Did you know that you put your shirt on inside out?” Amelia asked him, casually. Her voice held a thread of amusement.

“What?” Noah looked down, flushing. The hem was on the outside, trailing a few stray threads. “Damn.”

Amelia laughed. “It’s good luck when you do that.”

Noah snorted. “Yeah, that’s what some people say. I like to think I’m not actually this moronic.”

“Your father said something about you needing a break?” Amelia asked sympathetically.

Noah glanced at her. She stood in the archway between the living room and dining room. The light from the windows behind her illuminated the back of her head, making it hard to see her face, but her hair glowed.

“Yeah, I guess I do,” he sighed, wrenching his eyes away. “I just finished my PhD in computer science and I’m tired of squinting at a computer screen. I need a rest from the academics.” He moved closer, trying not to tug at his shirt.

“Well, I can certainly help with that. There are a ton of things to fix up around here.” She moved further into the dining room, then paused. “Although, I probably can’t pay you as much as you’d make programming.”

“That’s okay. I’m living with my dad right now and I have money saved up so I don’t have a lot of expenses. It’ll take me a while to find a teaching or research position in my field. I’m sure that whatever you can pay me will be fine.”

“If you say so,” Amelia said doubtfully. Noah looked away from her knowledgeable gaze. He liked her, but she made him nervous. She didn’t act like other old people he knew.

“What did you do your dissertation on?” she asked suddenly.

“Encryption and algorithms in advanced systems,” Noah replied. He waited for the confused or skeptical look he usually received after mentioning his research, but Amelia just hmm’d under her breath, a strange, shuttered look falling over her face.

“Why don’t we make a list of what you’d like to have done and I can give you an estimate for the repair,” Noah finally said when he realized she wasn’t going to ask any more questions. “I’ll give you a total for all of it, but I’ll also break it down so that you can see how much each job will cost. That way you can pick and choose what you want. Let me run out to the truck for paper and I’ll take some notes.”

“Sounds good,” Amelia said, pulling out one of the dining room chairs. “I’ll wait here.”

****

Wednesday morning Noah began stripping the front door. He’d only been there an hour, but already his wrists hurt from gripping the scraper. He despised the way the paint wore thin right where the woodwork was most detailed. It was fussy, difficult work and frankly, he was bored. He wondered if Amelia was awake.

He sighed and stretched, looking across the road into the woods. Amelia told him her home used to be a guesthouse for a large farm, but that the main building had long since fallen into rubble. Across a small clearing to the north, the broken remnants of the foundation jutted up from the ground like fractured gravestones. He massaged his palm absently as he eyed the landscape. He was so out of shape. All that sitting around, staring at a computer. And what good did it do him? He wasn’t happy, that’s for sure.

He tossed the scraper on the small table he’d dragged up from his truck and sipped at his coffee. The sun hadn’t yet crested over the trees and the porch was chilly. He’d have to get the rest of the outside work done in the next two weeks before it got cold. Early October was a lovely time of year in Connecticut, but sometimes the weather could be tricky. Seventy degrees one day then down to forty the next. He grimaced as a few coffee grains stuck on his tongue. He cracked his knuckles and picked up the scraper, but before he could get started again his cell buzzed. He pulled it out and checked the screen.

Is she there?

No, he tapped out. Srry. Have to work. He slipped it back in his pocket. His father was driving him insane. All morning at breakfast he’d peppered Noah with questions about Amelia. How old did Noah think she was? Did anyone else live at her house? If he didn’t know better, he’d think his dad was angling for a date. He shrugged, scraping another long strip of paint away. Whatever. He didn’t have the answers to his dad’s questions. He didn’t want to answer them.

“Noah? Is that you?”

Noah paused, then stepped back as Amelia’s footsteps stopped on the other side of the door. He moved just in time, too, as she swung it open. He would’ve fallen into her if he’d kept scraping, which would’ve been a damn shame since she was holding a plate of freshly baked cookies. They smelled awesome.

“Please tell me I can have one of those?” Noah wiped his hands on the rag he’d tucked into his pocket. His stomach growled. He hadn’t eaten much during his father’s interrogation this morning.

“Of course!” Amelia held out the plate.

Noah smiled gratefully and snagged a chocolate chip cookie. “These are my favorite.”

“Good. You can have them all,” Amelia deftly balanced the plate on his wobbly work table, nudging the scraper to one side.

“Mmm, these are delicious.” He took another bite. The ends of the scarf she was using as a belt fluttered around her knees. “Purple?” he asked, grinning around a mouthful of cookie.

Amelia looked down and shrugged. “I like purple.”

Noah swallowed. “My grandmother would never have worn something that color. Too bright.” Which is ironic, he thought, remembering her hair color.

“Life is too short to wear dreary clothing. And I hate to be boring.” Amelia tossed her head like someone half her age.

Noah grinned, stuffing another cookie in his mouth before he said something he’d regret. He knew how to live with someone who was a little eccentric, and how to keep the peace. He remembered his mom freaking out over his dad’s obsession with the family artifacts because she worried what the neighbors would think. His father kept the weird chunks of metal in the basement in a box, so Noah could never understand what the big deal was. It wasn’t like he waved them around in public. His dad would periodically take them out and look at them, convinced he could piece them together. He claimed the fragments were part of a communication device from an alien spaceship that had visited Earth in the 1400s. Noah’s dad was nuts, but he was mostly harmless. And never dull.

“Yeah, boring is overrated,” Noah said after he’d finished chewing. No one knew about those artifacts and he wasn’t going to spill the beans to a woman he’d just met, no matter how nice she seemed. People alwaysthought insanity was genetic.

“So, how’s my door doing?” she asked, swinging it shut. She sat on the porch floor and poked at the paint chips littering the wood with a bare toe. She was strangely graceful for an old woman.

“I’ve scraped most of the loose stuff off. Now I’m working on the stubborn sections. I need to make sure it’s clean before I prime it. I’ll probably have to do some sanding, too.”

“Sounds good,” she said, falling silent as he got back to work. She watched him for a while, neither of them saying much. It was weird. Her poise unnerved him.

“So, are you thinking of selling the house?” he finally asked, needing to fill the quiet.

“Nah. I just want to get it back into decent shape. Maybe my daughter will move back here someday.” Amelia picked at a hole in her jeans. The morning sun slanted past her hair, highlighting the fine lines on her face. He wondered if she missed her daughter.

“Where does she live?” he asked, running a finger over the spot he wanted to work on next.

“Oh, Leah lives in California. She has twin girls, thirteen.” Amelia smiled up at him and Noah found himself smiling back. “She’s an accountant. It’s not glamorous, but it’s a good career.”

Noah pried at a particularly stubborn fleck of paint. Did she think he cared about her daughter’s job? He thought about how much he’d hated the political jockeying at the university. Yeah, he’d never judge someone for having a non-glamorous job. It sounded restful. He scraped some more crap off the door. Time for sanding. He stole another cookie and then rummaged around in his toolbox for the sandpaper. Amelia had her legs crossed as she sat munching on a cookie. When he turned around, a flash of silver in the sky caught his attention. He frowned. It wasn’t moving.

“What is that?” he asked, staring over the trees. He’d thought it was just an airplane at first, morning sunlight reflecting off the metal, but now he wasn’t so sure. It looked like someone had stuck a giant needle in the sky.

“What?” Amelia asked, squinting.

“There’s something hovering just over the trees. Could it be the space station?” he mused.

“I can’t see that far without my glasses. What does it look like?”

“I’m not sure. Just a silver speck. I thought it was a plane, but it doesn’t seem to be moving at all.” Noah wasn’t sure why, but he pictured his dad in the basement at home, poring over his collection of rocks. Life was weird.

Amelia frowned, then got up. “I think I’ll give my daughter a call. Good luck with the door, Noah.” She smiled at him and ducked back in the house, careful not to track any paint scraps inside. Noah shrugged and went back to work, ignoring the silver needle that hovered above the trees. Probably just a weather balloon or something.

****

“So, how far did you get with her house?”

Noah chewed the bite of sandwich in his mouth and swallowed before answering. “I managed to get the front door primed today. And I remembered how much I hate prepping for paint.” His dad sat across from him at the kitchen table, slumped down as though exhausted. The laminate surface was cracked along the middle. We should get a new table, Noah thought, not for the first time. Eating on the worn-out surface every day depressed him.

“Did you talk to her at all?” his dad prodded.

Noah frowned. “Why do you care about this woman so much? I scraped and painted her door. I took a quick break for lunch. Then I got started on scraping her front window framing.” He quickly bit into his sandwich again. He wasn’t going to tell his dad about the argument he’d overheard Amelia have with her daughter on the phone. He felt guilty enough about eavesdropping. Except it isn’t eavesdropping when I can’t help overhearing, right?

She’d been in the kitchen, but because the door was open while he worked on it, the sound of her raised voice carried onto the front porch. He’d tried to ignore the conversation, but when she started insisting that “it’s happening again” Noah couldn’t help tuning in. What was happening again? Eventually, when Amelia began yelling into the phone, he’d realized that her daughter was being difficult. He didn’t think much upset her calm demeanor, so he’d felt a bit unhappy that her own daughter had got her so upset. Amelia was quiet, not prone to foolishness—he could tell even after so short an acquaintance. He grinned. Of course, he knew better than most how relatives could drive you crazy. His dad was crazy. His dad’s dad was crazy and so on. He took another bite of his sandwich, steadfastly ignoring his father’s exasperated glares. Noah wondered if he was eventually going to go insane, too. Probably, he thought, not particularly concerned. By the time it happened, he wouldn’t care anymore.

“That’s it? Seriously? You didn’t even try to have a conversation with her?” Noah’s dad asked, sliding a finger along the crack in the table. Noah winced as his dad’s nail caught and the old man started picking at the laminate.

“Dad, I’m fixing up her house. Most people don’t get into philosophical conversations with their hired help.”

“Don’t give me that, Noah. You’re more than the hired help.” The older man stood up, scraping the chair along the worn wood floor, its wheels frozen useless with age. “Gotta replace the casters on these,” Jaime muttered as he shoved it the rest of the way under the table. Noah winced at the screech, watching his dad stomp to the sink to rinse his dishes.

“Dad,” he tried.

Jaime ignored his son, dumping his half-full glass of lemonade down the sink.

“Dad, honestly. I don’t understand why you’re asking so many questions about Amelia.”

His father shut off the water and turned around, face irritated. “I’m just curious. She’s lived in that house for as long as I can remember. You know your Uncle Tony went to school with her, too.”

Noah nodded and finished his sandwich. “Yeah, so?”

“I think they may have dated.”

Noah stared at his father, incredulous. “You’re giving me the third degree because you think your brother ‘may have dated’ Amelia?” Noah used air quotes to punctuate his disbelief. “Since when do you care about local gossip? Especially when it’s what, forty, fifty-year old gossip?”

Jaime flushed and looked out the window over the sink. “I don’t know. When Tony was in high school he went out with her a few times. He said when they went to her house, her parents were never home.”

Noah rolled his eyes. “And at the risk of sounding like a broken record, so?”

“It’s just weird.” He had the grace to look embarrassed.

Noah opened his mouth, but then couldn’t think of what to say. This? Forty-years later and his dad wanted to know why Amelia’s parents weren’t home. “Dad, you’re weird.”

Jaime glared for a moment and Noah thought he was going to get really angry, but then he laughed. “Yeah, yeah, I know.”

Noah smiled in relief, hoping the conversation was over.

“You have to promise not to pull an inquisition on me every time I come home.” Noah said after he’d cleaned up his plates. “And you have to stop texting me while I’m working. I can’t text and paint at the same time.” He wiped down the counter and hung up the dishtowel. His dad was at the cellar door, hand poised on the doorknob, lips pressed together stubbornly. “Dad?”

Jaime frowned, then sighed. “Fine. Can I go downstairs now?”

“And you’ll stop with the texting?”

“Yeah, yeah, whatever you say. For Christ’s sake, you were the one who made me get an unlimited plan,” his dad complained.

“That was so you could text old Ronnie,” Noah answered.

His dad snorted and opened the cellar door. Noah sighed. He knew the old man was going down to pore over the artifacts. Every day after dinner he spent hours obsessively rearranging them, trying to puzzle them out. Noah worried about him sitting down there in the damp. Someday he’d find his father slumped over that damn table, hand clenched around one of the fragments, dead.

“Hey dad, mind if I join you tonight?” Maybe he could convince him to go to bed early for a change.

Jaime raised his eyebrows at Noah as he paused at the top of the steps. “Yeah, sure! You don’t have to ask me, you know. Those fragments are part of your heritage, too.” He smiled at his son. “I’d love it if you could take a look at this one section I’m working on. I’ve got three more pieces mated now and I think I’m close to a breakthrough.”

Noah nodded, remembering the weird metal bits. He hated the way they felt, almost tacky, but also scratchy. Like sticky sandpaper.

“I didn’t realize you’d put more of them together.” Noah thought about the way his dad had arranged them on the table, like a cardboard jigsaw puzzle.

His dad flicked the light switch at the top of the stairs and the bare bulb on the wall flickered on. “Yeah, I got them to fuse together last week. I don’t know if I told you but I picked up a box of junk from a yard sale and there were four pieces in it. They had them stuck in ceramic, part of a mosaic. I think they were using them as ashtrays.”

Noah nodded, following his dad down the steps. The stairs creaked. “Ashtrays? That’s weird.” Privately he thought that was as good a use for the fragments as any. “Wait, what do you mean you mated more pieces? What do you mean by that?” His dad had been trying to piece the fragments together forever. From what he’d told him, his grandfather and great grandfather had tried as well, but none of them had ever managed to get the parts that seemed to match to fit properly. “Did you glue them?” He followed his dad through the damp, trying not to trip on any of the old boxes strewn along the wall.

“No, no. No glue. When I got the new fragments they fit into some of the pieces I already had. When I stuck them together, they just blended. You can’t even tell that they were ever separate pieces.” Noah’s dad explained.

“Blended?” Noah asked, confused.

His dad didn’t elaborate, instead turning on the work lamp over the table he had set up on one side of the basement. Noah walked over, sure his dad had misspoken.

“Here, look at this,” Jaime thrust a palm-sized chunk of black metal in Noah’s hands.

Noah looked down at it, frowning, then realized what he was holding. Didn’t this piece used to be smaller? He sat down abruptly. Well, that’s weird.

“Dad, is this—”

“Yeah, yeah, that’s the piece your grandfather found in Scotland. Look, here is where it used to end. Here is where the new piece fitted on.” Jaime pointed to a section midway through the irregular fragment.

Noah squinted at the runes carved over the metal. He moved his finger along where his dad was still pointing but he couldn’t see anything. It just looked like a hunk of strange-colored black metal. The only reason he recognized it was because he’d spent hours poring over this piece when he was a kid, certain that he’d be the one to decipher the tiny markings. He used to think it was some kind of mathematic code. Looking at it more closely he saw that there were more markings. What the—? They looked like roman numerals. How had his dad’s piece got attached to the new one without even a hairline crack?

“Is that a roman numeral?” he murmured, angling it so that his dad could see.

“What?” Noah’s dad dragged a second chair to the table and peered at it more closely. “It looks like a backwards C to me.”

“Holy shit! That’s the roman numeral for five-hundred. What the fuck?” Noah traced his finger over the symbol, ignoring the sticky-tacky feel. “Centuries ago they used to use an I and a backwards C before someone came up with a D to denote five hundred.”

“How do you know that?” his dad asked.

“I have tons of useless information in my head,” Noah waved a finger over his ear. He crouched over, ignoring the twinge in his neck to look at the fragment more closely. “You know, this doesn’t prove anything except that this piece of metal was probably smelted during the Middle Ages.”

“Maybe, maybe not, but this proves something.” Noah’s dad took the piece away and pulled another jagged chunk out of his pocket. He twisted the two pieces, trying to find a side that matched. “Hmm.”

“Where did you get that piece?” Noah asked. He didn’t recognize it, so it must be new. He’d spent hours poring over the collection with his dad when he was a kid.

“Oh, Meg Porter had it in her basement. I finally convinced her to give it to me.” Noah’s dad was still trying to fit the new piece against the other smaller fragment.

“Meg Porter? The sheriff’s mother? I thought she hated you for dumping her at the prom decades ago?” Noah smiled, remembering the night his dad had told him that story.

“She does, but I finally found something she couldn’t refuse in exchange. An original pressing of Elvis’ Jailhouse Rock on a forty-five.”

Noah laughed. “Seriously? That’s what you traded? Where did you get that?”

“I had it all this time, just didn’t know Meg wanted it,” Jaime mumbled, still fiddling with the fragments. Noah watched him fit them together. Suddenly, they buzzed and fused together. Noah jerked back.

“What the hell?” He looked at his dad. The older man grinned triumphantly.

“That’s what I’m talking about! They just stick together now! You can’t even tell where they used to be broken.” Jaime held the larger piece out to Noah. “Go ahead. See for yourself. Run your finger over it.”

Noah took the piece and examined it under the light. It fit in his palm, the matte black metal sitting in the center of his hand, pricking his skin. Noah grimaced. He really hated the way these things felt. He tried to pry it apart but it wouldn’t budge. “How did you do that?”

His dad handed him another small, thumb-sized fragment. “Try it yourself. Maybe you can get it to fit.”

“Is this another Meg Porter special piece?”

His dad grinned.

Noah snorted and bent his head over the two pieces. The one he’d just been handed had what looked like half a numeral printed on it. The edge of the fragment cut right through the character. He looked down at the bigger piece and fitted the smaller one against the edge. Abruptly, they snapped together and Noah jumped in his chair as a spark of static electricity zapped his fingers.

“Whoa!” Noah stared at the piece in his hand, then at his dad. More weird shit. “How is this possible?”

“I told you the stories were true.” Jaime held out his hand and Noah handed him the new, larger chunk. “My grandfather and his dad swore everything they told me was true, but they never had proof.”

“Yeah, because what they told you was insane,” Noah remarked. He sat back in his chair and ran his fingers through his hair. “I don’t understand how those pieces fused together like that.” He thought for a minute, trying to wrap his brain around it. The only light was the bulb above the wooden steps and the lamp on the table. The dark pressed at him.

“You gotta have faith, Noah,” his father murmured.

Noah took a deep breath. “You know, Dad, I was reading recently about some new materials they’re developing. Some of it has really weird properties, like self-cleaning paint, or that stuff that hardens when you hit it. Maybe this self-healing metal is part of some research that somebody dumped. Then grandpa picked it up at a yard sale.” He stared at his dad hopefully.

His father slowly shook his head at him. “These pieces are older than that, Noah.”

“Are you sure about that, Dad? Maybe they lied to you.” Noah really wanted to believe the logical, sane explanation. He remembered the stories he’d been told, about how the fragments had been passed down through the generations, how they were his ‘legacy,’ but it wouldn’t be the first time his dad had played a practical joke on Noah. He remembered the old man laughing: the kid will believe anything! At the time it had hurt, but now Noah felt a stab of hope that the entire thing with the fragments was nothing but an elaborate hoax. Then he caught his father smiling grimly.

“Did I mention that I had one of the pieces of cloth the fragments had been wrapped in carbon dated?” Jaime asked, and Noah’s blood ran cold.

How writing a novel is like running a marathon. Over and over.

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It’s fun, and then it’s not, and then the endorphins kick in…

“So you want to be a writer?” How many times have you read those words as a prelude to an essay about being an author? Once? Twice? I bet they all said some variation of this little gem of wisdom: if you’re writing because you want to be rich and famous, forget about it. You need to appreciate the writing itself. Writing is ART (said in a lofty tone).

I think I may have said those words to a few people. I am sorry. The truth is, you DO need to enjoy the writing itself, but the truth also is, I want my books to SELL. I want to make money writing and I want to have a lot of readers. I want to write a bestseller.

Unfortunately, the people who sell the most books and make the most money are composed of less than 1% of the total number of writers in the world. I am not one of them. So, the first statement is still true. If you don’t love the writing itself, you may as well stop and get a job doing IT or something else practical.

Also, writing is difficult. Every time I begin a novel, I’m very excited and I love my characters and my plot, but by the time I hit 10,000 words I want everyone in the novel to die via meteor strike. Why? Because writing a novel is like running a month-long marathon: it’s hard work. It’s a love-hate relationship. I love hating writing. I hate loving writing. I love writing about what I hate. I love writing about what I love. Writers are a little bit crazy.

Another problem I’ve encountered as a writer: your first novel will probably suck. Mine does. It’s embarrassing. The best thing I ever did was write another novel because I got a little better at it. And then I wrote another one. And another one. And another. I didn’t really like the prose in my novels until I’d written ten or so of them. Another way to fix the suckage problem is to let your novel sit around for a year or so (DON’T stop writing in the interim). When you pick it up again, you will think it’s terrible. Revise. When you’ve repeated this process a bunch of times and you finally pick up one of your novels and you don’t hate it, give yourself a lollipop.

Last, remember that writing a novel and selling a novel are TWO TOTALLY DIFFERENT THINGS. If your goal is simply to be published, awesome! You have options. If your goal is to become a working writer: ack. I’m sorry. I’m one of those and it’s kind of, well, totally insane. I mean, why didn’t I decide to become a graffiti artist instead? That would be SO MUCH easier. Why? Because it would be a hobby, not a career, not something I’m trying to use to buy stuff like food and clothes. Here’s a little article that sums it up nicely: http://heidicullinan.wordpress.com/2013/11/14/if-you-build-it-they-dont-necessarily-come-the-heaven-and-hell-of-marketing-a-book/

If you still want to be a writer, here are some things I’ve learned along the way. I’ll start with the cool stuff:

– Getting a cover from the publisher is great. This is seriously awesome if your artist is good.
– Getting paid. This is always awesome.
– Getting fan mail or email from a reader or a good review. AWESOME.

Now on to the practicalities:

1. There are a few genres that are selling right now. They are:

erotic romance
young adult
new adult

That’s it. Not sci-fi or fantasy or mystery (unless you’re Dan Brown) or anything else. I try to sneak my favorite categories into romance novels (sci-fi or mystery or suspense). PW agrees with me: http://www.publishersweekly.com/pw/by-topic/industry-news/bookselling/article/55458-big-names-dominated-bestsellers-in-2012.html

2. Even if you sell a book or two, that doesn’t guarantee that you will keep selling. One of the best writers I’ve ever read sold a bunch of books and then her publisher dropped her because of poor sales and they have the last novel of one of her series in jail and it’s never going to see the light of day (deep breath). Why? Because. No other explanation.

3. To be a successful writer, you not only have to write (run that marathon, over and over), you also have to be lucky. Authors don’t know what’s going to sell next. Even if you write in one of the popular genres right now, you have no guarantee that it will sell. Why? Because. Even the publishers don’t know. Some big publishers throw gobs of money at a new author to promo the work and the book sinks. Some throw no money at a book and it sells like hotcakes. None of us know why.

Look at J.K. Rowling (http://www.leakynews.com/jkrowling-new-book-pseudonym-crime-novel-robert-galbraith/): she sold a book under a pseudonym and it only sold 1500 copies (that’s considered good sales, by the way). When people found out that she was the author behind “The Cuckoo’s Calling,” it sold way more. She was very lucky to sell as well as she did when she was J.K. Rowling, and then she wrote a book under a pen name and sold hardly any copies, proving how very lucky she was as J.K. Rowling. Same writer, same quality of prose: totally different outcome (at least until readers found out about the deception).

4. It’s easier than ever to get published right now because of the rise of digital readers. That means the market is saturated. This means it’s harder than ever to get published by a large NY publisher. Options if you still want to get published? Small publishers, self-publishing. Remember that getting published is SEPARATE from actually selling a book or sustaining a career. Know why you want to write and plan your life accordingly.

5. If you still want to get published, here are some things to try:
-Get an agent (http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/guide-to-literary-agents)
-Submit to small publishers who don’t require an agent (mostly erotic romance publishers)
-Self-publishing (Amazon KDP)
-Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award (ABNA)

6. Read up on the business:
-Scalzi’s blog: http://whatever.scalzi.com
-Absolute Write Forums: http://absolutewrite.com/forums/index.php (check for scam publishers and iffy contracts)
Dear Author news posts: http://dearauthor.com/news/
How to submit queries to agents: http://queryshark.blogspot.com

7. If you have no support system (i.e. a girlfriend/boyfriend/mother/dog etc.) to take care of you as you suffer the inevitable rejections x1000 you will go crazy. The only other option is to be very VERY certain you want to be a writer. Like, obsessed and neurotic and totally single-minded about it. Having a support system AND being totally obsessed is the best way to be a writer.

8. You must write fast. The reality of the market today is that publishers and readers want their books NOW and then they want the next book TOMORROW. They also want them CHEAP (I am a reader and I am totally guilty of this). It used to be that authors would publish a book every year, or maybe every two years. Some really lucky authors can still do this, but most of us know that we need to produce a lot more than that in order to make any money.

I know people who have signed contracts to write a book every month. I even know people who write a novel every two weeks. I can write a book in one month, but I have no idea how the people who write one every week or so manage that feat of super-human brilliance. Maybe drugs? Electroshock?

The reason authors need to produce more, faster and cheaper, is that the market is saturated. The market is saturated because of digital readers and the rise of self-publishing. This tightens competition, especially because the NY publishers are no longer completely in charge. I know someone out there understands the basic market economy of this better than I do, but the results are still the same: write fast.

9. Craft mechanics – what the publishers I’ve worked with look for:

– No head-hopping. This used to be okay, but most publishers strictly forbid it now.
– Avoid ellipses, colons, semi-colons, etc. No, I am not joking. Some publishers are okay with creative punctuation, some are not. You can use them, but it’s best if you know how to say the same thing without them, because you may be asked to revise them out of your prose.
– No first person POV. This was popular a decade ago—not so much right now.
– Dialogue tags should be few and boring. “He said,” “she said,” is the best way to go. Anything creative gets flagged by editors. Even better is to skip them entirely and let your character’s actions stand in for the dialogue tag. ““Are you sure?” Emily scratched her forehead, puzzled.”
– Avoid passive voice when possible. (Passive voice was avoided by all. LOL, I couldn’t resist.)
– Avoid filter words (He felt his whole body seize up with fear. VS Terror rushed through him.)
– Use past tense; it’s easiest for readers to absorb. When was the last time you read a book in present tense?
– Don’t repeat the same words over and over and over. Use your word processor to find your bad habits.
– Keep your chapters around 5000 words or less. In the era of twitter, readers get fatigued much easier. Also, ain’t nobody got time for that (reading). It’s easier to put a book down and pick it back up again if your chapters are tight.
– Do NOT kill off your main character in a sequel. Many publishers have contracts which explicitly forbid this. I know what you’re thinking: so-and-so did this and she is very much still arguing in interviews that it was the right thing to do, but honestly, have you seen the fan-rage all over the internet about it? Have you seen the scathing reviews of her third novel? Personally, I would not want to face that. I would like to keep writing more books.
– Know in which genre you are writing, for what audience. Do not end a romance tragically (that is technically a horror novel). Romance novels must have a happily ever after ending. Horror novels usually contain gore. A female romance reader (30-60ish) will probably not enjoy a romance novel where the hero dies at the end. On the other hand, if she’s reading a memoir, a dead hero would be okay, as long as the narrative shows how the main character survived the death. In suspense and mystery: kill off everyone you want except for your main character. In fact, I’m having a hard time trying to think of a genre where it’s okay to kill your main character… maybe literary fiction? Hmm.

10. Social media: do have a website, Facebook account, Twitter handle, etc. The flip side is DO NOT EVER ENGAGE TROLLS. Do not respond to reviews (good or bad, but especially bad). Do not argue with readers. NO NO NO. And DO NOT EVER buy a good review on your own book, post a good review on your own book, or take pics of your junk and post it on the interwebz. Just… no.

Also, do not let your relatives post nasty commentary on other writer’s sites/reviews/etc. If your significant other starts ranting about your competitor’s ugly face on his/her book reviews or websites or twitter, you’re going to regret not stopping that disaster before it turns into the SHITSTORM that ATE YOUR CAREER.

11. Contracts: read them carefully. Do NOT EVER sign away your copyright.

12. Do not plagiarize. Ever. Never ever. The internet peeps will ALWAYS FIND OUT and you will go down in flames while we all snicker at you for not being able to write your own stuff. Also, it’s just not cool.

13. Do promo (advertising, word-of-mouth, etc.). Don’t spend too much money on it. Post your book info to your website, twitter, etc. Buy some small ads ($5-$50). I’ve done everything from free promo to buying ads that cost $400. After several years, my data suggests that luck is more important than throwing money at the promo problem. Writing in a popular genre is also helpful. I sold more of my first book, for which I did no promo, than any of my other books. Why? Because it happened to be in a category in the romance genre that people like to buy.

Also, realize that doing promo SUCKS BIG TIME if you are an introvert (like so many writers are). I hate doing promo. I love being alone and daydreaming. Promo is the OPPOSITE of that. I really don’t want to talk about how awesome my book is. I want a reader to buy it and love it and then post a review online about how awesome my book is so I don’t have to talk about how awesome it is. I’d rather be home alone. Daydreaming. Or writing my next book.

14. Money stuff – here are some rough guidelines:

Do not expect an advance. From small publishers, it’s rare. From big NY publishers, advances are becoming increasingly smaller and are sometimes nonexistent these days as they begin to change their contracts to reflect the digital market. Royalties in the small ebook publishing market can be anywhere from 30-55% of the net price of a digital or print-on-demand book (gross minus the % taken by distributors). Some print royalties are still only 6% of the net (the traditional figure before all this e-reader craziness hit the market). If you get an advance, remember that you will not receive royalties until the sales make up the difference for your publisher (depending on your contract).

Expect to get paid on time, every three months, from your publisher. Expect royalties from third-party distributors to arrive six months after your book is published. If this doesn’t happen, jump ship (if your contract allows it).

15. You must pay taxes on your royalties. You are self-employed.

16. Run away from publishers that expect you to pay THEM for editing and cover art or if they expect you to do those things yourself (In the commercial fiction world of novel-writing. In the poetry world, well, all bets are off).

17. You will receive no real-time data about book sales. Unless you self-publish (and even then it’s an iffy thing), you will have no idea how many books you are selling. The only way to tell is via book rankings on third-party sites and since they tend to change their algorithms every few months (yes, Amazon plays god with the market), you can’t really rely on those figures either. The only time you know what you’ve actually sold is when you get your royalty statement.

Some big publishers are changing this for their authors, but most of the time it’s like using a ouija board to figure out what you’re selling: http://www.nytimes.com/2011/10/20/business/media/authors-to-get-sales-data-from-three-big-publishers.html

(This makes promotion nearly impossible, which makes me cry. Sometimes I slam doors. Depends on the day.)

18. If you publish a book, especially in a popular genre, people will download it off the internet and give it away for free. Yes, this is illegal in most of the world. No, there’s not much you can do about it. What are your options?

– You can send a DMCA takedown notice (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Digital_Millennium_Copyright_Act). Most sites ignore those.
– You can ask Google to take down the page that has the pirated link to your book. This is of limited value since most people who pirate books don’t need Google to find the files. (https://support.google.com/legal/troubleshooter/1114905?hl=en)
– You can use a service like Muso (http://www.muso.com/anti-piracy/) to send DMCAs for you. This is not free.

19. Word count: I tend to keep most of my novels around the 50-60,000 word length. I also write novellas which can be anywhere from 18,000 to 30,000. Why? Because most of my publishers set the price for novels based on length. Most readers will not buy a book that is over $5-6 dollars. The moment you go over 60,000 words, the price goes up and no one will buy the novel (unless you’re Justin Bieber), OR the publisher sets the price of their novels to cap at $6. Writing more words means you’ve done far more work than you need to for the amount of money you will get back in royalties.

Expect your readers to complain about how short your novel is, especially if it’s shorter than 60,000 words. Most of the time it’s because they liked it and they’re sad it’s over, but sometimes they’re pissed because they believe they’ve been ripped off. I empathize with the readers because I am a reader, too.

20. If you’re writing romance, use a female pen name. If you’re writing suspense, sci-fi, or mystery, use a male pen name. I know male romance writers and female suspense writers, and they use different pen names for different genres. The market says that only dudes are good at sci-fi and only women are good at romance. It’s sexist and stupid, but it’s reality (with a few exceptions).

21. Why listen to me? I’ve been a working writer in different capacities for many years. I’ve done technical writing (for big and small companies), proofreading, editing (textbooks, poetry, etc.). In the past three and a half years, I’ve written and sold twenty-two novels under various pen names in various genres. Oh, and I’ve also written four poetry chapbooks. I am not a best-seller (in the Elizabeth Gilbert meaning of the word), but I’ve sold okay. I am not famous. I am not rich. I am what people used to call a mid-(okay low)-list writer. I also don’t know everything, not by a long shot. I still feel like a beginner writer (and compared to some authors, I am very much still a beginner).

Despite all the crapola that goes along with writing, I can’t seem to give it up. If you can’t either, GOOD LUCK and welcome to the club!

Who Saw the Deep — first reader review!

I am so happy to have my very first reader review for Who Saw the Deep. Ms. Brigita posted it over on her blog, Do the write thing: 5 stars! Thank you so very much Brigita! I’m very happy you liked the novel.

Noah and Amelia. Their relationship is gripping from the start. Despite the age difference, it feels so natural and right. Klocek-Lim’s portrayal of Amelia is wonderful. She’s so unusual and surprising that one has to love her.

I have some more good news: Who Saw the Deep will be coming out in PRINT next year! I will be able to do signed copies, yay!

Also, the book is still on sale at Evernight, OmniLit, and Bookstrand — 25% off! Go get your copy now!

buy from: Evernight – Amazon Kindle – OmniLitBookStrand – Smashwords

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Romance, Suspense, Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Mystery
Word Count: 55,000
Published By: Evernight Publishing
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Click here to read an excerpt.

When Noah moves back home after grad school, he doesn’t expect a simple handyman job to turn deadly. Amelia seems like a sweet old lady with a run-down house, but appearances can be deceptive. When an alien ship lands in her woods, Noah discovers that everything he believed about Earth and human civilization is wrong.

Amelia already gave her heart to one man—does she really want to let another one inside? Even though Noah is everything she ever wanted, can she really trust him? He seems like a good person, but her family’s genetic legacy is more important than romance.

When all their secrets are laid bare, Noah and Amelia discover that the survival of their species may be more dependent on love than either could have imagined. Civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals. And love, especially in the face of betrayal, is worth everything.

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Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award (ABNA) 2012 Semi-Finalist Winner!

“This novel is well written, original, and clever.”

—Publisher’s Weekly

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Who Saw the Deep — release day!

Today is the day I hoped would arrive since I entered a sci-fi novel into the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award contest. My book, Who Saw the Deep, is finally available! I’ll be adding in the rest of the buy links as they go live throughout the day. I hope you enjoy reading this novel as much as I enjoyed writing it. 😀

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buy from: Evernight – Amazon Kindle – OmniLitBookStrand – Smashwords

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Editor's Pick

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Romance, Suspense, Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Mystery
Word Count: 55,000
Published By: Evernight Publishing
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Click here to read an excerpt.

When Noah moves back home after grad school, he doesn’t expect a simple handyman job to turn deadly. Amelia seems like a sweet old lady with a run-down house, but appearances can be deceptive. When an alien ship lands in her woods, Noah discovers that everything he believed about Earth and human civilization is wrong.

Amelia already gave her heart to one man—does she really want to let another one inside? Even though Noah is everything she ever wanted, can she really trust him? He seems like a good person, but her family’s genetic legacy is more important than romance.

When all their secrets are laid bare, Noah and Amelia discover that the survival of their species may be more dependent on love than either could have imagined. Civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals. And love, especially in the face of betrayal, is worth everything.

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Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award (ABNA) 2012 Semi-Finalist Winner!

“This novel is well written, original, and clever.”

—Publisher’s Weekly

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Who Saw the Deep – giveaway!

Hi everyone! In honor of my new novel, Who Saw the Deep, I’m running a little giveaway on Facebook. If you head on over to my new author page, https://www.facebook.com/Christine.Klocek.Lim.Author, you can enter the contest to win a free copy of my book!

Like my Facebook page and leave a comment so I know you’ve stopped by and I’ll put your name in the running. If I get 50 Likes by Saturday, November 9, I’ll give away one ebook copy. If I get 100 Likes by Saturday, I’ll give away two! I’ll pick the winners at random on Sunday.

Thanks to Evernight Publishing, the book that made it all the way to the semi-finals of the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award in 2012 will soon be out in the universe. 😀

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Who Saw the Deep — coming November 8th, 2013!
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Romance, Suspense, Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Mystery
Word Count: 55,000
Published By: Evernight Publishing
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Click here to read an excerpt.

When Noah moves back home after grad school, he doesn’t expect a simple handyman job to turn deadly. Amelia seems like a sweet old lady with a run-down house, but appearances can be deceptive. When an alien ship lands in her woods, Noah discovers that everything he believed about Earth and human civilization is wrong.

Amelia already gave her heart to one man—does she really want to let another one inside? Even though Noah is everything she ever wanted, can she really trust him? He seems like a good person, but her family’s genetic legacy is more important than romance.

When all their secrets are laid bare, Noah and Amelia discover that the survival of their species may be more dependent on love than either could have imagined. Civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals. And love, especially in the face of betrayal, is worth everything.

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Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Semifinalist — April 2012

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What are people saying about Who Saw the Deep?

Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Semifinalist — April 2012:

This novel is well written, original, and clever. Noah Heath has just completed his doctorate in computer science and his father suggests he give himself a break and help a local senior citizen with some handyman chores. Amelia is a woman that Jaime Heath has known since childhood. On Noah’s first day of work, he notices a flash in the sky, a silver needle, but Amelia denies seeing it. Even so, he hears her call her daughter, Leah, saying,”it’s happening again.” When he returns home, his father starts telling him about the family “artifacts,” a few chunks of old metal. Noah starts to question, and more importantly, believe his father and Amelia’s tales of centuries old invasion and the part their forebears played in it. That the power of computers is limited only by our imaginations makes the tale convincing; the lack of little green men and the highly plausible abilities of the villains make it wonderful reading. It’s a pity to classify this book as science fiction; it reads more like the ancient myths, or even fairy tales. The author really knows his characters and uses them beautifully. Perhaps he’s had centuries to develop them.

~Publishers Weekly Review

The pitch is wonderful and engrossing. The belief “That civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals.”, holds more truth than most realize. There are hints of foreshadowing inserted in the narrative, hinting of what might occur. This helps bring a reader into the story and want to continue to turn the pages. The author does a credible job in describing how the characters act and what they are thinking. That along with the foreshadowing creates interest and a connection with the persons being described and the storyline. The reader has a chance, in many instances, to interpret what the individuals are feeling, instead of being told directly. The plot flows well, moving from the beginning and then into Noah’s house with his father. The expectation of what might happen builds from the beginning and makes a reader want to continue on.

~ ABNA Expert Reviewer – Amazon.com

Who Saw the Deep cover reveal!

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Editor's Pick
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Who Saw the Deep — coming November 8th, 2013!
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Romance, Suspense, Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Mystery
Word Count: 55,000
Published By: Evernight Publishing
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Click here to read an excerpt.

When Noah moves back home after grad school, he doesn’t expect a simple handyman job to turn deadly. Amelia seems like a sweet old lady with a run-down house, but appearances can be deceptive. When an alien ship lands in her woods, Noah discovers that everything he believed about Earth and human civilization is wrong.

Amelia already gave her heart to one man—does she really want to let another one inside? Even though Noah is everything she ever wanted, can she really trust him? He seems like a good person, but her family’s genetic legacy is more important than romance.

When all their secrets are laid bare, Noah and Amelia discover that the survival of their species may be more dependent on love than either could have imagined. Civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals. And love, especially in the face of betrayal, is worth everything.

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Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Semifinalist — April 2012

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What are people saying about Who Saw the Deep?

Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Semifinalist — April 2012:

This novel is well written, original, and clever. Noah Heath has just completed his doctorate in computer science and his father suggests he give himself a break and help a local senior citizen with some handyman chores. Amelia is a woman that Jaime Heath has known since childhood. On Noah’s first day of work, he notices a flash in the sky, a silver needle, but Amelia denies seeing it. Even so, he hears her call her daughter, Leah, saying,”it’s happening again.” When he returns home, his father starts telling him about the family “artifacts,” a few chunks of old metal. Noah starts to question, and more importantly, believe his father and Amelia’s tales of centuries old invasion and the part their forebears played in it. That the power of computers is limited only by our imaginations makes the tale convincing; the lack of little green men and the highly plausible abilities of the villains make it wonderful reading. It’s a pity to classify this book as science fiction; it reads more like the ancient myths, or even fairy tales. The author really knows his characters and uses them beautifully. Perhaps he’s had centuries to develop them.

~Publishers Weekly Review

The pitch is wonderful and engrossing. The belief “That civilization endures because of anonymous acts executed by ordinary individuals.”, holds more truth than most realize. There are hints of foreshadowing inserted in the narrative, hinting of what might occur. This helps bring a reader into the story and want to continue to turn the pages. The author does a credible job in describing how the characters act and what they are thinking. That along with the foreshadowing creates interest and a connection with the persons being described and the storyline. The reader has a chance, in many instances, to interpret what the individuals are feeling, instead of being told directly. The plot flows well, moving from the beginning and then into Noah’s house with his father. The expectation of what might happen builds from the beginning and makes a reader want to continue on.

~ ABNA Expert Reviewer – Amazon.com

A sestina for Halloween

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After watching the trailer for the new remake of Carrie, I remembered a poem I wrote eight years ago. After revising it numerous times, I think I’m finally happy with it.

Scar

Her body soothes each wound into scar
but she is never done. Memory
cuts the skin like a silvered worm,
refuses to bow down.
Her fists ache with disappointment
when the razor dulls a moment

too soon. The moment
flesh closes into scar?
More itchy disappointment
until she bloods the knife again. Memory
is carved like this. The first cut curved down
her arm. A documentary of worms

on TV as she squirmed: worms
in her head, on her skin, the moment
grown into a long second spent down
on the floor fighting the urge to scar
more symbols into memory.
She recalls disappointment

that the sting wasn’t worse, disappointment
in the too-small wound, the worm
of blood barely flown. Memory
so thin. She bandages today’s moment
with gauze and hope. She has a dozen scars
now, a hundred—her skin worn down

like hatred. Like love. Down-
stairs he damaged her. Disappointment
bled contempt with her youth, her lack of scars.
Her lack of fear. His fingers worm-
like, fraught with booze. One moment’s
miscarriage into a memory

that contaminates for years. Memory
clots like blood. She sets the knife down,
caps the antiseptic. Breathes a moment.
As usual, the new cut is a terrible disappointment.
She hunts between scars
for an uncorrupted worm

of skin, clean of memory and disappointment.
The razor will slip down so easy—the way a worm
disappears after rain. Nothing left but scar.